Once
having gone through several versions of the edit, when Grace was editing the
sound design Sam decided he wanted even more cutting out and we cut out the
whole conversation scene at the end. I think this makes it stronger as the
piece has near to no dialogue and this scene didn't seen to fit in with the
rest of it.
I wasn't sure on keeping the shots of the tennis
ball but Sam had several reasons as to why he wanted them and it needed
something in between him being sick and playing golf again so I left these in.
Grace had edited that last scene in a ough version
so I had to re edit the last few shots to the sound but then al I had to do was
export and burn. This took several attempts and the exports were not showing
the effects correctly and the fades were liney. In the end Sam had a software
to burn the discs and this smoothed these back out.
In the presentation I was happy with the overall piece
but the projector made some of the shots look really over saturated and the
colours were all over the place which I wasn’t too happy about.
